ahhhhhhhhhhh ok SO MUCH HAPPENS IN THIS CHAPTER. and i really do think this chapter needs to be merged with ch1, because it has all the plot beginnings and whatnot, it launches the action, it's intriguing, it hooks the reader and draws them forward.
aaaaand i know you are probably not going to want to hear this but i think the scene in ch1 where tony goes to see steve in medical needs to be taken out or put in with chapter 3 with some connective tissue linking it to the rest of ch3 (like maybe a scene showing how the avengers get out of medical and go back to tony&steve's etc), because ch2 (which is all peter) should be merged with ch 1's peter scene for a stronger overall ch 1. does that make sense?
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Date: 2014-02-25 09:34 am (UTC)aaaaand i know you are probably not going to want to hear this but i think the scene in ch1 where tony goes to see steve in medical needs to be taken out or put in with chapter 3 with some connective tissue linking it to the rest of ch3 (like maybe a scene showing how the avengers get out of medical and go back to tony&steve's etc), because ch2 (which is all peter) should be merged with ch 1's peter scene for a stronger overall ch 1. does that make sense?